Tuesday, March 25, 2014

Incomplete (Incomplete #1) by Lindy Zart


3 1/2 Stars

Blurb:

There are three absolute truths in Grayson Lee’s life:


1. His existence was a mistake.

2. No one is good enough for his best friend, Lily Jacobs, especially not him.

3. He loves her anyway.
 
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Things that I love/like about this story:
 
*The funny and sarcastic banter between Grayson and Lily.
*Aidan, Grayson's little brother.
*I like how Lily knows what Grayson is thinking and when he needs someone to just hold on to or to just be there, with no words exchanged.
*How he finally stands up to his parents.
*The short conversation Grayson has with his principal concerning the school lockers. I LOL'd with it.
 
A few lines that enteratined me:
 
"If I'm smart, that means I'm right most of the time." I open my mouth, but he continues. "And I think you're going to be famous, so I'm probably right, since I'm smart and everything."
 
"Touché." I have just been bested by an eleven-year old. The kid is smart.~Grayson and Aidan
 
"You said fuck."
 
"Yeah. Don't say that."
 
"You did."~Grayson and Aidan
 
Grayson is an ass at times towards Lily because he feels like he isn't good enough for her so he says hurtful things.
 
"Why did you kiss me?" she repeats sharply.......
 
"Because you're a good enough replacement for Ana."
 
^^^^Total jerk move!
 
I gave this story a 3 1/2 star rating because even though I enjoyed majority of it, I felt like the story dragged in places and was repetitive at times with how Grayson feels about certain people and situations. But I would definitely recommend this book to those who likes a good Y/A read. It kept me entertained and lately that has been lacking in the books I've been reading lately.
 
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About the Author
 
Lindy Zart has been writing since she was a child. Luckily for readers, her writing has improved since then. She lives in Wisconsin with her husband, two sons, and one cat. Lindy loves jearing from people who enjoy her work.
 
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